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Progressive House track needs feedback
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| djtomo |
Hi guys, I just got done with a new track I've been working on. I was trying to go for a Kaskade/ Adam K and Soha kind of feel to it and came up with this. It might be a little repetitive, but that's progressive house for ya. Any feed back would be highly appreciated.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=i2_qVqGk-Cg
Thanks for listening,
- Tom |
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| djtomo |
| Yea I would LOVE vocals on this track but I cant sing, nor do I have the networking skills and resources in finding and recording vocals on the track. |
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| djtomo |
| Yea, you're definitely right about after the 2 minute mark. Without vocals it's kind of boring and plain. Thanks for the tips =) |
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| flow1988 |
| this song is sexy! should have uploaded somewhere else so we could here the high quality version. |
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| djtomo |
Thanks flow, if you want, you can check out my tracks in better quality on reverbnation which is a site I'd recommend for all up coming and new producers.
http://www.reverbnation.com/tomlue
Once again, thanks for listening. =) |
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| Shad0wmaster |
You absolutely nailed the Deadmau5/Adam K & Soha sound with that rhythmic stabbing synth. Overall the track has a pretty polished sound.
Once you enter the breakdown/buildup, I think your lead synth needs a lot more automation - filter sweeps, effects, and so forth, because it does get a little long-winded during that part.
And +1 with the people who said it doesn't really develop after ~2:20. Maybe a few more subtle effects, or delay tricks...? I dunno - I just feel like it needs a little more to it. |
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| Terry Barker |
good, very deadmau5
agree with vox comments above, but, perhaps even a synth line at least or a few bleaps like squares or something just to flatten it out.
Perhaps the percussion is a bit to complex in this piece? and a bit tlc on the eq / level over master side of things will really bring this track out.
Arrangement is great and love the main synth. Thumbs up and good work keep it up
Terry |
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| djtomo |
| Thanks for the suggestions and comments guys, I'll definitely work on the automation and effects at the end of the peak after 2mins. |
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| meriter |
| I really like what happens a little after 1:00. I'd like to hear more of that <3 |
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| esha |
| nice work bro, sounds pretty mellow, the track goes for a good way |
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| djtomo |
Thanks for the comments and reply guys, I cant describe how much it really helps me as a new producer. I'll revise and possibly send the track out to some desperate labels after my finals (school sucks, I want to be famous already...lol. yea right.)
Once again, thanks for your time and ears =),
-Tom |
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