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Work-in-progress...Comments would be wonderful!
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| IanBuzz |
sup guyzzz
well first off... is this already a song? haha... the main melody after I made it sounded really familiar and in all honesty it's just what came out
secondly, your thoughts... too boring? too ____? leme know i'd really appreciate it guys!
keep in mind it's a work-in-progress
Thanks so much,
Ian
http://www.ianbuzz.com/fa09.mp3http://www.ianbuzz.com/fa09.mp3 |
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| EddieZilker |
It starts of nicely.
The highs are a little on the shrill end. Esp. shakers and hats.
I think the bass-line could use some more grit and presence - it sounds very anemic.
Nice progression, after the bass-line gets introduced.
A few more parts could be added to really round out but keep the hook, where it's at.
Nice modulation on the lead-hook, along with a very cool progression.
Could easily love this tune. Nice work, so far. Looking forward to the finished product. |
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| IanBuzz |
Hey thanks Eddie!
Yeah get'n used to my new monitors so i've gotten "too much shaker" b4 so i think i REALLY need to turn it down now ;)
I see what you're talking about on the bass line, I had a really gritty sawtooth in there in an earlier version but I think it sounded too stereotypical-electro-house so I took it out, maybe i can tastefully re-add it in here and there
Thanks for your suggestions, they're all valid points and I'll definitely keep them in mind
I'll let you know when a "final ver" is done... oh it's never done haha
take care man! |
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| Mozarts ghost |
Couldn't get the file!!!
/MG |
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| Energy Flow |
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