|
'BREATHE' 320Kbps
|
View this Thread in Original format
| wavydalker |
Hi peeps,
Been working on a new track I would like your views on. Its a progressive trance track with an electro feel to it called 'Breathe'
I have given it to you as a 320kbps sample so enjoy.
Here's the link:
Breathe ;) |
|
|
| iloop |
solid club thumper, more on the house side, but nevertheless- wicked... where it looses some energy, it gains great melodic vibes.
Great sounds, sub-bass and overall drive and arrangement is premium. props for sharing :) |
|
|
| wavydalker |
| Thanx very much for the positive feedback m8 :) |
|
|
| Mr Rogers |
thanx for ur feedback mate! i appreciate it!
whoa..where'd this tune come from.
didn'tlike the kick at first but blends in nice throughout song....
bassline change is awsome.
maybe if u lower the freq. on the kick jjjjjjjjust a little...but just a thought.
like' n the piano...just don't know if it fits in this track.
that bassline is awsome in the break.
after the piano the buildup is f'n tight!
I dunno i just think u have such a techy feel to ur track, then the piano kind of messes that up. Im wondering what that would sound like with some tweaked out synth instead of the piano...just a thought.
great track! |
|
|
| wavydalker |
| Thanx m8, I totally know where you are coming from when you mean the piano part doesn't seem like it should be there. I thought I would try something with a mix up of both styles(trance and tech house) just to see what it would sound like. I think will do a techy mix and also a more dreamy mix and see how I get on. Thanx very much for the positive feedback.:) |
|
|
| marcos.tate |
| i agree with what the others have but with the additional opinion that i got the impression that the track was too slow for what it contained |
|
|
| Dj Cola |
dling :D.
done, the intro is cool, really cool.
bass is nice!'
the guitarr is funky :).
damn this is coool!
guitarr feels like some old porn movie tune XD
piano is cool.
really emotional! is that some guitarr backing upp the piano?
break flows really well, i cant really complain about this track, it has stuff happening all the time, good samples, good bass, good melodies. this is flawless :eek:
this tune makes me feel amatuer :p.
the piano comes in with the rest of the tune now. that sounds great!
10/10 dude! |
|
|
| wavydalker |
| Wow guys, Im loving the positive vibes im getting back from this tune. Thanx for the feeedback. I know how hard it is to get good feedback from this site as everyone really knows thier stuff and they are good critics.:) |
|
|
| dj alliance |
Its like a cross between trance and house. More Housey. Love the Piano mate. Dont like those Basslines though, you need to sort out the frequency range on them, they seem to clash a bit, give them mroe space mate. Nice Guitar too.
Nice track, needs ot be worked on a little still though, but its good. |
|
|
| covert23 |
| could be a little bit faster i think and it probably would sound better with a synth instead of piano although it does sound ok..arrangment is good..keep it up....reveiew my meager efforts new dawn by covert23 thanks.. |
|
|
|
|
