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Maiwand - Second view 224k (Finall version)
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| mavve |
Hello here is the final version of my tune second view.
the tune is final but i will remove the vocals @ begining.
How ever i want you guys to listen and review it, and then i want to know if its signable.
Tnx for spending your time reviewing.//Mavve
Link upp for 7 days.
http://s25.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=...9L1IDA7OOW1JF07 |
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| covert23 |
| realy like it keep up the good work mate:whip: should get signed nice beets........ |
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| mavve |
| Tnx for your support =)thats why I love this place. |
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| funkysouls |
| like the tune..sounds pro too. |
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| mavve |
| tnx man, but any one that can review it? |
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| Mycron |
hey mate,
nice track, although that high synth is not my cup of tea, but nice flow
the other melody is the main part is very cool:)
good work, keep it up!
cheers,
Peter |
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| mavve |
hehe Tnx m8 , that melody was writen when drunk =)
I thought of this as a Intro track to a mix thats why the build up with the high end synth is so long . |
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| DJFreaq |
Damn...
Your compression seems a bit too harsh for me. A bit too much of that pumping sound (it's very subtle but I get the feeling it might be a tad too much).
I like that squeelch noise. Sounds nice.
Bassline is nice.
Some need delays on that sine-type synth.
Vocals are cool. I like them phased out and put in the background. Well done.
/me listens to Maiwand - Second view [01:55 of 07:27m/224Kbps/44KHz]
Yea... I really like it. But your compression is starting to give me a bit of a headache.
Keep working on your mastering and I'll think you'll have a fap-tastic track.
Good going.
9/10 |
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| mavve |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJFreaq
Damn...
Your compression seems a bit too harsh for me. A bit too much of that pumping sound (it's very subtle but I get the feeling it might be a tad too much).
I like that squeelch noise. Sounds nice.
Bassline is nice.
Some need delays on that sine-type synth.
Vocals are cool. I like them phased out and put in the background. Well done.
/me listens to Maiwand - Second view [01:55 of 07:27m/224Kbps/44KHz]
Yea... I really like it. But your compression is starting to give me a bit of a headache.
Keep working on your mastering and I'll think you'll have a fap-tastic track.
Good going.
9/10 |
tnx mate for the review Im glad you liked it and ill add some delay and take care of the compresion . |
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| Kris Xperiment |
Great melody, If this is what you come up with when you're drunk, then sign me up as an official alchoholic :wtf:
I think the vocals compliment the song beautifully, and shouldnt be removed, but Im assuming they must be in order to get signed. This is the sound of success. |
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| mavve |
tnx for thos great words but actuly those vocals are owned by me =)
so they are in for the signing ! |
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