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[techtrance] Pjotr G vs. Jay Rico - Halberstram
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Pjotr G
Hi,

I made another track together with Jay R., resulting in another techtrancer


http://www.whiteroachproductions.nl...Halberstram.mp3

of course, we'd like to know what you think! :D

Greets PJ
sooper
Hey guys,

I love the percussion from the start.. it's very "rolling", giving the song a lot of energy.

However, the snare and the bass sound very muffled - almost over-compressed? I'm not sure if that's the right term. The plucks or chords or whatever sound so much crisper and cleaner in comparison to the bass and snare.

I think with some more EQ'ing and work on the steroe spread, the whole mix will sounder cleaner and clearer.

I like how ya bring everything back at 4:07 - that was cool :)

Overall is a good tune and if you can clean the mix a bit it will be that much better!

Keep up the fine work,
Trev
nils
this track is sooo good! killer track! :D
exhilarating stuff. excellent work :)

what does halberstram mean?
MegaMan
does not sound like a killer track to me as a listener, but from a producer's point of view very nice track indeed.
Pjotr G
quote:
Originally posted by nils


what does halberstram mean?


It's a character from American Psycho :p
Xenocreator_PG_
Nice initial percs.

The hihats is "hissing". I think it may be more suitable to have a cymbal that clashes a little bit more; has bit more of a tap to it.

Excellent progression.

2.19 the new layer frequencies are harsh, though I like the synth selection & pattern.

3:40 Nice deep groove. I like this. :p

The hissing hihats go alright amongst the surrounding sounds now.

Altogether a Great job mate. Nice work.
extalin
after it get's going i really like it.
i'm listening on crap speakers atm so
i think i'll like it even more when i
can hear the sub freq's.

the stabby pads tickle the inside of my head (crazy stereo effect) :p
.A.Y.
didnt like the sound of the pad
but except that really good work
keep up the good work man
Jay M
Kick and percs are really pleasant to hear.
Missing something to hook me from the start tho. Plucky synth is just not enough, could be more upfront, maybe longer. Lead is sounding pretty cheap/soft, expected something more 'killing'.
Vocal is pretty cool.
Eq and mastering sounds great to me.
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