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| MessiahProject |
Just listening to your track now - and it sounds VERY good. I too have just finished my first track and it doesnt sound anywhere near as professional as yours - if you can achieve this sort of thing in 40 minutes id like to hear something you spend days on!!
My 1st track can be heard here - Love Games Sample.mp3
You can really hear the difference!!!
Carry on the good work..
MP |
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| Pete_B |
Like the strings in this one, the breakdown is real sweet. Maybe a touch on the high end eq? I think this would sound much better if it was just a little brighter.
Keep working on it, this one is gonna be a nice track when completed. |
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| aosis |
Thanks both of you for your feedback, I really appreciate it.
Pete - I will see what I can do about making it brighter - I think I'm just concerned with taming the sound right now before I master it, but yes I agree with you - I will def boost those pads.
Also have another update of the track, I replaced the bass completely, and added some synth work as well as lengthened the intro. Seems to be coming along solidly :)
LINK
Would appreciate any comments on this version!
Regards |
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| rewyred |
Hey,
I'll be reviewing the updated version.
First, very very nice tune. You HAVE to make an extended mix of this and notify me when it's done! :)
I really don't have any comments on the downsides of this track, because I feel there aren't any. The bass fits neatly with the kick and there is some nice background percussion going on. Nice build-up and EXTREMELY nice pads. The background sounds are very nice and balanced. As previously mentioned, nice breakdown and beautiful pads. Overall a very nice production!
I can definately see this one get signed.
Keep this up!
/Thomas F |
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| aosis |
Rewyred, thank you very much for your generous compliments.
| quote: | | First, very very nice tune. You HAVE to make an extended mix of this and notify me when it's done! |
Will do ;) |
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| djkoolaide |
| Amazing! I really like what you've posted so far. Definitely finish up an extended mix of this one m8! :D :D :D |
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| aosis |
Thank you :)
Will post an update of this track soon, hopefully. |
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| IDarkISwordI |
Very nice work. Love your synth work, very professional. I really don't have any critiques of it lol. Good job. I think I'll work this into my next mix :).
Cheers,
Zac |
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| aosis |
| Haha, cool man :) - thank you. |
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