|
[uplifting trance] Stimula -dust
|
View this Thread in Original format
| stimula |
hey ,
heres a short clip of an uplifting trancer im working on.
the track has long break with nice lush strings with a choir leading up to a 1999 style crescendo.
please check it out and tell me what you think
( i welcome all comments good and bad)
and please tell me what you think of the melodies :)
project name:Stimula
track name:dust
length : 2:48 demo cut
Bitrate : 192kb
download link -
http://www.arach.net.au/~iwright/stimula-demo.mp3 |
|
|
| RickyM |
Hey Stimula - love the breakdown with those almost orchestral strings
Love the choral pads too, maybe fatten up the 'orchestral strings' a bit - but this definitely has a 1999 feel to it with those synths that come in.
If you work on fattening up the synths then this will be great. |
|
|
| staticblue |
here's fast comment from me :)
> nice melodies in this one
> your sounds are a bit thin indeed :( as RickyM said, i suggest you should work on taking off this software feel from them.
with some more workon the sounds this should be very nice ;)
static blue |
|
|
| stimula |
ta thanks for the feed back
It sounded fine on my cheap head phones,
Guess that explains a lot.
can you tell me more about the problems with the synths?
any thing about the track i should know ? |
|
|
| staticblue |
| quote: | Originally posted by stimula
ta thanks for the feed back
It sounded fine on my cheap head phones,
Guess that explains a lot.
can you tell me more about the problems with the synths?
is it lack of mid range ? |
it's not only a lack of midrange, if you add some midrange on a "cheap - sounding" synth it will just sound dull and muddy and even more cheap. |
|
|
| stimula |
| thats odd because most of the sounds came from a roland jp-8080, |
|
|
| staticblue |
after a second listen on monitors, the synth that needs the most work (IMO) is the high saw playing in the beginning (so the main synth aswell).
sorry, ive exagerated a bit in my first post ;) and those deep growling fx's are nice.
maybe you could work a bit more on the transitions aswell
peace
static blue |
|
|
| stimula |
What is wrong with the synth ?
envelope adsr ?
filter?
FX?
? |
|
|
| staticblue |
| as i said, i think it's too thin. If it comes from the JP i'm sure you can make it sound better. Maybe youve HP-filtered it too much aswell. |
|
|
|
|
