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DJ KaRiMNeT - System K (My New Track !)
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| DJ KaRiM NeT |
Hello all ..
after tribal life i've finished composing and producing my new track : System K
here is a low quality version of da track to get some comments :)
DJ KaRiMNeT - System K (Original Mix)
edit : File Changed with a 128 KBPS version :) plz re-download |
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| Klangzentrum |
beginns a bit dry...could use an fx-whoosh or crash at the beginning, 2, imo...
bass reminds me somehow on new order - confusion... ;)
nice pads and plucked sound! :cool:
i think your track could have some more percs going on...perhaps also an additional synth with a different mellow later on...even it was only a piano that plays one or two times...
nice one! |
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| DJ KaRiM NeT |
Thanx for listenin' dude :)
it sounds dry coz of da low quality ..
and about ur comments .. when u listen to the high quality one u will find some differences that u wish :) |
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| Klangzentrum |
| quote: | Originally posted by DJ KaRiM NeT
Thanx for listenin' dude :)
it sounds dry coz of da low quality ..
and about ur comments .. when u listen to the high quality one u will find some differences that u wish :) |
ok, then i´ve said nothing! :D |
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| DJ KaRiM NeT |
lol :D
i need da comments 2 b better :) ;)
and thanx again 4 reviewing :) |
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| retiro |
| You ought to reverb those perc. in the intro. Nice little pluck during the break - I find a lack of transition creativity here - needs to be sorted out to smooth the tune out! Overall, could be improved, with different synth layers and more perc. to fill out the sound! After that it has potential - keep working at it! |
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| Sunquest |
i agree with retiro, could use some more layering to make it fuller, right now its kinda like just background elements of a song, u need something infront, in ur face, something pumping good :D
otherwise, this sounds like a great gouryella style track :D i like the beats...
keep it up m8
peace out |
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| DJ KaRiM NeT |
retiro .. Thanx for listening :) and this isn't Final :) and plz download the 128 Quality version i think u will find some differences :)
Sunquest .. Thanx for reviewing :) and plz re-download the 128 quality version to see the differneces :) |
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| retiro |
Re-downloaded and my feelings are still the same! Not keen on that flute type melody you have in the earlier part of the track (the sound I don't like)! What I do like is that pluck! Again I echo that the transitions are pretty bad - especially the one at 2min 45sec! This could be much improved! The mixdown and eq are pretty cool but just tighten up the production!
Cheers! |
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| DJ KaRiM NeT |
Thanx for re-downloading and i'll try ma best about the transitions by adding swooshes and using some fx ..
:) |
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| retiro |
| Yeah thats it mate! |
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