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Osiris-celestial transistions-full 192kbps(my 2nd track) feedback appreciated
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| dannyc |
hi guys here is my second reason production. been using reason over 6months now and loving every minute of it. the track has my prefered dark edge to it and i feel i've improved alot since my first track 5th sun particularly mastering wise. anyways take a listen here and tell me what you's think, all feedback very much appreciated. full 192kbps version:
http://www.dance-industries.com/track.asp?track_id=7161 |
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| JohnOC |
good stuff danny, typing as i listen
-start sounds like N-Trance: Set you freeeeeee :)
-nice panning on the percs
-strange structure, definately an intro tune. impossible to mix!
-kick is good, clap is fine too.
-really nice fx swirling around here, very unique
-its melodic from the word go, no teasing the structure in just whack here we go melody in ya face :whip:
-lacking a solid offbeat open hi hat
-bassline seems to be hiding somewhere in the mix needs to be sharpened up
-seems u are learning lots of the hidden tricks in reason, massive progression in quality of production here with u danny. more progress like this and u will have some really nice tracks on the way
-getting darker now, german influences. cygnus x / mark norman darkness
-big phat offbeat strings brainbug-ish like it (prob 2 much reverb)
-even though its a 192 mp3 it sounds muddy, not as sharp as a 192 should. perhaps thats ur mastering:nervous:
-nice ideas and new techniques here its good to see ur not sticking to a formula
anyone looking for a quirky trance rule breaker then give this a download. :)
overall a vast improvement and lots of new techniques introduced from the d-man. at this rate u will have some spanking trance bad boys for us fairly soon.
good work danny :thepirate :happy2: |
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| Sunquest |
hey m8
kick needs a bit of work, needs to be louder, the melody (the bass mainly) is very dark hehe, not my style but im sure plenty like this..., maybe u can cut down just a little on the reverb, more percs, louder bass
strcture is kewl, overall just need a little work, but ur getin there ;)
hear u l8r
peace out |
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| dannyc |
thanks for the feedback john and sunquest. yeah the track was suppose to be something different trying to get a bit of a style. yeah john defo an intro track that was the idea ;)
sunquest as you know really like your stuff. i might start using some vsts for my bass, stop em becoming so muddy. and as usual i just cant resist drowning my tracks in reverb hehe.
but yeah i know i still have a way to go with the mastering but that will come with time and practice hopefully.
thanks again guys :)
anyone else?? |
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| pho mo |
Hi m8, your production sounds heaps better than your last tune, making lots of progress there! I liked the melody from the start of the tune, but towards the middle it gets a bit boring, with that single offbeat note.
Keep up the good work mate, can definitely hear the improvement in this one! |
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| dannyc |
thanks for the feedback pho mo, hehe i knew it would'nt be to everyones taste but i wanted to try something different so i just had a bit of fun with it. anyways i'm more concerned with the standard of mixing and mastering, once this is improving i'll be happy.
mybe you might enjoy my next track more.
thanks again man ;) |
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| RickyM |
| Really nice song - sounds like the Bongo song at the start - but less cheesy and nicely produced |
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