| Massive84 |
begin is cool.
kick seems not perfect yet, think it lacks low(but it's headphones).
more reverb on the clap and make it a bit clearer.
0,55 hmm not sure is that a bassline? it's cool the way it got brought it in.
the deep bass needs more room i think.
your perc layers seem good, but the perc does not sound 100%, pann and EQ :).
melody in the intro, few chord changes are cheesy and few are good and few are scary, you sure know how to make it weird :p.
hehe i dig sudden stops!
break and melody is nice, you sure made this scary in a way.
i don't think the kick quite fit this tune but i am not very sure about this since it's headphones.
to bad you used saw for the most things, makes it a bit generic.
Mixing need work, mainly the perc and clap, rest i can't say for sure.
good luck. |
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