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| djfurbydavos |
HI PPL!
This is my first thread here, though i´m visiting TA for years now.... I just need you guys, cause i dont know anybody who listens to trance music in the way u do!
I uploaded a song of mine, and i need some critics so i can improve it! :) So PLZ post whatever u want..
CLICK HERE
Greetz,
Furby :eyes: |
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| Ibiza Dreams |
Hey bro i'm gonna take a listen, but next time, if you choose to share one of your own productions go this forum :
http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...p?s=&forumid=74
It's the Amateur Producers forum. Your thread will most likely get moved soon.
Wow, very impressive work. I like the track alot. I'm no producer, but it sounds very professional and very organized. Yes it's a typical uplifting trance track to me, but very well done. I don't have anything bad to say about it... except maybe the break in the middle where the piano comes in is a bit abrupt and forced... it comes all of a sudden. Maybe bring in the pause in the middle a little more smoothly? The buildup and intro and everything else is on point. Maybe perhaps the song is a bit too "typical"? It seems like a regular uplifting trance song, which although well produced, I don't think it will get you extremely recognized. Need to put some innovation in there somewhere.
Post this in the Amateur Producer forum, you will get more help there. Also, what equipment do you use? |
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| rainbow_marble |
| not bad at all, sounds very professional. the piano break in the middle seems a bit long eh? what equipment do you use? sounds good though. |
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