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Please review my track!
 
jåcë
breakbeat progressive trance

Adam Jace - Lagoona (Original Mix)

let me know what you guys think..

thanks to Gav (OzTiesto) for hosting ;)
Psygnosis
I tried to download it mate but it keeps giving me error messages saying "cannot find mirror"

It's maybe the connection on my side :conf:

EDIT: now it works, will comment when finished :)
nicknack
totally reminds me of a few orbital tracks, sounds good ;D
djway
Checking it out now.

Expect, as always honest feedback :)

Glad to hear some more guys getting into production!

May I ask what you were using to produce it?

--djway

Edit:Review:-

Some of the leveling, on the kick appear to be clipping, especially on my headphones (better quality then my speakers). A bit more delay on the sonar like sound may sound better, or maybe the mids need more compression to make that sound high (either that or it's compression should be taken out of the mids a bit more).

I like your sound introductions.

The phrase before the melody is on it's own sounds a bit long like it doesn't need to be there(it's not building up/breaking down).

For a 10 min track it sounds like something is miss. It just doesn't really do too much, it sounds empty after the peak, but even before the peak sounds a bit empty like a few more layers need to be added, and it's just really small things/sounds that in my mind are missing.

I like the melody, bass line and chrous, don't get me wrong i'm not trying 2 write it off. :)

--djway
jåcë
honest feedback is what im after! ;)

software:
fruity loops studio 4
acid pro
soundforge

hardware:
evolution MK-361C midi controller


supposed to be getting reason off a mate but haven't got round to doing so yet.. really want to start learning something bigger and better than fruity
djway
quote:
Originally posted by jåcë

supposed to be getting reason off a mate but haven't got round to doing so yet.. really want to start learning something bigger and better than fruity


Reason is a really easy "sound bank" to pick. Listening to a track you can tell if it's been produced in reason (well a trained ear can anyhow).

Cubase is a bit harder to learn, but you'll get a far more unique sound out of it, which will make it stand out further.

But Reason vs Fruity; Reason :)

--djway
jåcë
nice detailed review!

i'll take all those points into consideration

with the emptyness point I see what you mean, more layers for sure.. gonna work on it

thanks ;)

with regards to cubase.. i learned a bit of it at college and i can't say im the biggest fan of it, ill see how I go with reason
djway
quote:
Originally posted by jåcë
nice detailed review!

i'll take all those points into consideration

with the emptyness point I see what you mean, more layers for sure.. gonna work on it

thanks ;)

with regards to cubase.. i learned a bit of it at college and i can't say im the biggest fan of it, ill see how I go with reason


Lol, yeah forgot about what you did in college, whoops :)

My production app/studio of the moment is what Holden uses... www.buzzmachines.com it's not for everyone (it's a very technical app), but I love it :)

--djway

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