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Please review my track!
 
jåcë
breakbeat progressive trance

Adam Jace - Lagoona (Original Mix)

let me know what you guys think..

thanks to Gav (OzTiesto) for hosting ;)
Psygnosis
I tried to download it mate but it keeps giving me error messages saying "cannot find mirror"

It's maybe the connection on my side :conf:

EDIT: now it works, will comment when finished :)
nicknack
totally reminds me of a few orbital tracks, sounds good ;D
djway
Checking it out now.

Expect, as always honest feedback :)

Glad to hear some more guys getting into production!

May I ask what you were using to produce it?

--djway

Edit:Review:-

Some of the leveling, on the kick appear to be clipping, especially on my headphones (better quality then my speakers). A bit more delay on the sonar like sound may sound better, or maybe the mids need more compression to make that sound high (either that or it's compression should be taken out of the mids a bit more).

I like your sound introductions.

The phrase before the melody is on it's own sounds a bit long like it doesn't need to be there(it's not building up/breaking down).

For a 10 min track it sounds like something is miss. It just doesn't really do too much, it sounds empty after the peak, but even before the peak sounds a bit empty like a few more layers need to be added, and it's just really small things/sounds that in my mind are missing.

I like the melody, bass line and chrous, don't get me wrong i'm not trying 2 write it off. :)

--djway
jåcë
honest feedback is what im after! ;)

software:
fruity loops studio 4
acid pro
soundforge

hardware:
evolution MK-361C midi controller


supposed to be getting reason off a mate but haven't got round to doing so yet.. really want to start learning something bigger and better than fruity

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