Registered: Mar 2001
Location: Cairns Highlands, Atherton Tablelands
2 Year Old (WIP)
an old track I made 2 years ago when I first started producing like the others Ive posted recently.
realy need some other peoples ears/opinions on what this track needs to be up to standed.
thx
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Last edited by Peter Campbell on May-07-2012 at 22:09
May-05-2012 23:55
Evolve140
Mixdown Freak
Registered: Mar 2005
Location: Nuevo Mexico
The delay has an issue that's pretty noticable... the delays seem to clip on each other or something. Sounds weird. Otherwise the mix is super bright, lots of synths playing in the lead zone... Just kinda dizzying.
May-06-2012 01:28
Peter Campbell
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Mar 2001
Location: Cairns Highlands, Atherton Tablelands
quote:
Originally posted by Evolve140
The delay has an issue that's pretty noticable...
cool thx, will look into that
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May-07-2012 22:03
Seandroid
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2010
Location: Edmonton, Alberta
Along with what Evolve said, which is pointless to repeat, my biggest issue is that the track has nothing to make it stand out. It sounds like the 50th track on a compilation that nobody finds bad per say, but nobody feels any particular reason to buy it.
Most of the trance tracks that really hit it huge always have a defining quality, something that separates them from the rest.
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May-07-2012 22:42
TranceLover007
DariusX
Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
Yep, agree with Seandroid on this - if you could find some cleaver and interesting sounding lead then you will shift this track to a different level man, you are not missing that much with it but this melodic/unique and catchy lead will add that extra spark to make it much more likable and memorable - only my $0.02
Cheers man,
Darek
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