You forgot the rolling bassline.

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Originally posted by dj_alfi change your avatar for fucks sake.

Yeah I guess you're right. Maybe I'll add one.

Kick is weak, out of place. It doesn't have any relation with the bassline.
It needs more low frequencies.

I quite like the way it all fits together - does need a distinctive melody though

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I think there's something in there, but for me this one just rambles along without doing anything for the entire length.

Which is nice, because everything else you've not finished lately has been excellent

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Something more need to happen, something more distinct (like an apr or lead playing some cool but sweet or even Techno/Electro sound).

The rest is interesting enough for me to give it a go and finish lol

Cheers man,

Darek

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I suggest making some space in the mix and work a bass line that stands out more and find some separation between elements. I like the energy you got at 5.34.