Things I like about this track

-The Arps at the beggining
-The sense of energy at the build up
-The massive sounding hits during the tracks approaching climax
-The lead just dying to burst into full gear

What I recommend

-Add effects to create ambience, like sharp or air-like sounds
in the background, that pan from one ear to the other.
-An airy synth in the beginning that gradually dies down, to give it an enhanced string sound to the string already working.


Keep it up, it looks like a promising track.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

Thanks kris for the suggestions. I added those elements now. I hope it's better.

Please checkout my song. I just updated it. tell me what u think Now.

click sig pic at bottom. Thanks

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Just what it needed to fill that small gap! Excellent job, I like the extensive build-upm you think it's ready to explode, and when it does it's massive.

This is going on my Mp3 player.

Good job, this was high quality.

We'll keep in touch


I want to hear more.

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EoJ-cL2G_qY

Thanks Kris. We'll should keep in touch. I'm glad u liked it.


Anyone else wants to give my any suggestion or feedback. please click link.
Click here to listen

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Pretty nice tune. Very airy feel and lots of well placed fx in it. Cool... That melody feels like it needs a bit of variation or a break somewhere though. Its pretty massive, but looses impact as your hammering it for most of the track.

Production wise, its pretty good. Some of the percs feel a bit odd. The highhats are too loud I think maybe. Nice snare though... very sharp and clear.

Overall a pretty epic euphoric tune. Nice work.

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Originally posted by Axolotyl ... feels like it needs a bit of variation or a break somewhere though. Its pretty massive, but looses impact as your hammering it for most of the track.

Aha! Comments like this reassure me that I'm not going crazy Jay! I guess I was not outta my mind when I reviewed this at P5.com, eh!?

Cheers...and *Bump*

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please review my latest AMBIENT track HERE.

Hey Thanks for the feedback Guys. I really appreciate your feedback. Your right about the variation. I'm actually working on a new version. I made more variation on the beat. And also I had to work on the snare to make it better. I put a new melody on the break. I'll post it up here as soon as it gets approved on DanceIndustries. And DigitalAura You do have an ear for music. I'll post up the new version. within the next day or two. =)

Thanks for listening =)

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hello Everyone. I just been working on my song Again. I post up A Newer Version. I brought out the snare rolls and put some life to them. I added more variation to the beat. I added a Second Melody with different sounds. I made the break better.Check it out. I think u guys for the feedback. let me know if this One is Better??? =)

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In this tune your filter gone crazy...about one minute only high....o my gash... nice work...but melody could be more diferent...greetz

not bad... pads voud be more fater.... but that is your style...

]keep goin...
Btw coud be more variations with hats...

Hey thanks for your suggestions. I actually have a new updated I just forgot about it. Click the link at top or here it is.

This one has better Quality.

Click Here

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Last edited by DarkSynergy on Jul-11-2005 at 04:52

Screaming leads... a very powerful beginning - it is just too high-pitched at times for my liking, but the High fidelity is definately present.

I'm not entirely sure about those pads, they seem to be outside of the mix, almost as if they are in a different room.

Great build-up, but I think that it could use something else for the melody. Too hooverish for my tastes, but it's sounding good production wise.

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