Wasup Everyone. Check out my Song ::NightFall:: It's another trance song All done in P5 Baby. Please listen and let me know what you think. any suggestions??? Feedback??? let me know what u think. Thanks

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Hey Everyone. I don't know why no one replies. but please review my song. Thanks.

here's a link to my song.

Click here to listen to my song Dance-Industries

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Heya

Dunno why people havnt been reviewing lately.. the boards seem pretty quiet this past week or so??


OK, I listened to your track and

ITS SHITTTT!!!!

just kidding dude..

nice intro. Snare rolls are alright but kinds feels a bit cheesy or too obvious or something. A bit of reverb can hide hem in the background a bit better.

The snare is too loud and in your face I think. Dominates the track way too much.

Your synth programming is quite good. Melody has some nice structure to it and flows along quite gently. Theres a few elements in there that feel a bit dry, but that can easily be improved on.

One thing is, there isnt really any big break and buildup. Felt kinda odd with an uplifting number like this. Not bad, just different.

Nice outro too... though it kinda stops a bit suddenly.

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hey Axolotyl thanks for the reply. I thought no one would. I really appreciate your feedback. Your right about the snare. sucks. I suck at snare rolls. =) One thing I have problems with is buildups and breakdowns. Something i really need help with. I'll try to make it better and give u an update. Thanks for the suggestions. =)

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