Hello to all of you who bumped this thread,

I've been working on this track for quite a while now, so I wonder if it's finished enough. Perhaps you could help me out or give me some suggestions, if needed.

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I used Cubase SX at this one, finishing it with ACID PRO 5 {Mainly for the SFX} Just listen or download, and tell me what you think.

-weBs

Last edited by websley on May-27-2005 at 22:20

Hi ive just finished listening yoursong... I really find the weBsley in this song too something typical..
*turns the song on again* nice drive with the percs too! bassline sounds a little wet to my opinion... I personally dont really like it that way.. nice synths @ 1;01.. 1:59 sounds rather relaxing.. for an energetic song:P.. changes alot @ 2:46 nice work!! 4:40.. I like the breaks you always do.. just like in The Rats song.. sounded typical.. same filter maybe? 5:38 you can just feel "it"coming.. the pulsing :P you know .. kinda abrupt end.. but orignal
all in all good production!!

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Thanks Takkra,

I'm not really sure of what causes this song to have such an abrupt ending. Maybe I've to do some more editing there.

Anyone else?

hats-to hard
kick-good
bass-some arpeggio maybe?
clap-good,but for these hats is'nt cool
cool track middsynths-to liquid
harmony- cool,but to frequent differnt function(sory ,but I'm not prof in English)
arrpegio in middle end-cool
Pad at end-very good
Snarerolls-could be longer
also you could put some loop or smthng

Had pleasure
Rating 7/10(good work,but can be better

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Originally posted by linkmage harmony- cool,but to frequent differnt function(sory ,but I'm not prof in English) Snarerolls-could be longer

I know what you mean by that I can only say that such harmony functions were the main reason for making this track.
Those snares indeed are a bit short, it's become a costum of me but I'll see if I can make longer rolls

thanks for your time

Top class production m8, chunky and tight. Very progressive with really nice melodies. The first time i listened to it i thought it might need a little dubby sort of vocal now and then in the mix but after the second time i thought na.....it doesnt really. I can't really say nothing bad about this track. Its complex and keeps you interested from start to finish.

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Last edited by Desty Nova on Jun-16-2005 at 19:20

Thanks you guys, maybe I'll burn it on a cd and take my getto blaster to the beach nearby:

Damn, the wheather's nice!

couldn't listen website said :

Je probeert deze file van een Tripod member pagina te downloaden:

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Je probeert deze file van een Tripod member pagina te downloaden:

your trying to download this file from a tripod memberpage.
maybe your page got expired weBs :S

well.. weve always got yousendit and soundclick

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Originally posted by websley Thanks you guys, maybe I'll burn it on a cd and take my getto blaster to the beach nearby: Damn, the wheather's nice!

that sounds lovely, the wheather here is a bit brisk, I would love to go the beach!

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Originally posted by Takkra thats a true Hollandaise website Meet the fcukers your trying to download this file from a tripod memberpage. maybe your page got expired weBs :S well.. weve always got yousendit and soundclick

It's fair enough to say you guys didn't read the "{right click + save as}" after the DOWNLOAD text. Of course Lycos doesn't support deep-linking
The only direct way to play it, is to press "PLAY", that is IF you've got IExplorer browser or if your browser supports mediaplayer plug-ins

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Originally posted by Desty Nova that sounds lovely, the wheather here is a bit brisk, I would love to go the beach!

Well, it's been about 33 degrees celcius today in the south of Holland. But I decided to skip today. I'm going tommorrow

Peace out,

-weBs