Nice bass - good mastering.. cool synths.. but, again, being that the melody is in major (It's an F-Major Triad to be precise) it just doesn't really go with a hard trance/acid song (which is why I made mine happy hardcore) good stuff though - did you use Rebirth for the TB-303 bass?

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Rebirth, Yes'm.

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this is pretty cool, the 303s are pretty damn excellent too. i dont think the melody quite works unfortunately, aint really your fault tho. some of the areas sound a bit too heavy and filled, whereas other sections of the mix sound pretty empty, for example when the melody kicks in for the first time it sounds a bit bare, but on the contrary it sounds a bit hectic at the start of the tune, well for that early on it sounds a bit hectic for me . some filter or volume modulation in certain parts as some of the transitions sound a bit too sharp if you know what i mean. the sound is pretty crystal clear and well done. only other thing i can suggest is some perc fuck abouts and random fx, the way shokk used to

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Well its the first trance song I've ever completed, so I'm quite happy with it. Thanks for the comments. I agree it could use some kind of intro as it does kind of get right into it.

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hi!! really like the intro..

i love acid sounds and these sounds are great!

the kick is also very good

the first 43 secs are the same.. and its kinda boring...

a loved how you change the pitch of the acid melody.. sounds really good..

the melody is fine.. the sounds are also pretty good.. i loved the vocal.. at 3:20 you MOST change the bass or something.. its feeling so dry.. and a little boring..
i loved the beat, excellent snare!

and.. thats all

Really good for your first trance song.. have you made music before?

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Cheggy, nice to finally hear some of your work. Well done, man. Keep on keepin' on!

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Originally posted by alanzo Really good for your first trance song.. have you made music before?

Yeah, I've made music before. Just not trance. Mainly techno.

A.Y., I hear what you're saying about the bassline. It needs to be a bit juicier hey.

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Last edited by hey cheggy on Nov-24-2003 at 03:43

Trance..Techno.. I always thought there was no difference? Feel free to correct me

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HUGE difference.

Trance dj = PVD, Tiesto, Sasha, etc.
Techno dj = Chris Leibing,Adam Beyer

Have a listen to some of their live sets and you'll see what I mean. Techno is more percussion based, less melody based.

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So techno is more progressive then? (more repetative)

Is this your opinion on the difference or is it based off of something? (meaning you can back it up)

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