Originally posted by SystematicX1
New Pre mix wip track Im working on. Still unsure on the composition as I switched melodies from the end to the middle arrangement. Not sure if it's blending right though.
Sounds nice n shiny, good melodies. I agree bass n drums need some thought, but I'm not sure what !
Richard, how we are not hearing you on the radio is beyond me.
Such a cool track and the current placeholder, imho is just fine and very well suited.
Loving that post effect on the delay.
Mix seems a little cloudy and I am getting some clip on the bass just fyi
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May-01-2017 19:33
Richard Butler
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London
quote:
Originally posted by SystematicX1
Richard, how we are not hearing you on the radio is beyond me.
Such a cool track and the current placeholder, imho is just fine and very well suited.
Loving that post effect on the delay.
Mix seems a little cloudy and I am getting some clip on the bass just fyi
Yes the mix, grrrr
Thinking of getting it pro mixed maybe...
Just by chance I recently did a bunch of business with these top new signed UK artists, and am hoping I might get one to sing on this, we will see...
Originally posted by SystematicX1
Thanks for the reply Evo..
What are you picking up on the drums...sounded decent (for a pre mix) to me..but,what are you hearing
dont know what you mean by pre-mix but just they are very quiet, the kick is hardly punching through at all
bassline isnt driving the track on, its missing a lot of depth
however if you havent mixed the track then you can disregard my comments
Originally posted by SystematicX1
New Pre mix wip track Im working on. Still unsure on the composition as I switched melodies from the end to the middle arrangement. Not sure if it's blending right though.
Sounds are nice but it lacks some drive. Not really hooked on melody :|
Originally posted by Richard Butler
I've nearly finished this, and am working with a couple of vocalists on this, so for now just my random vocal idea is a place holder
Originally posted by gordan100
Melody at 1:16 sounds like i have steal it from somewhere
The aesthetic of the lead reminds me of Way out west - future perfect which is a nice thing, I think maybe you can build a better track around it, I cant tell much on these headphones but it sounds well mixed though.
May-05-2017 06:48
MSZ
godspeed
Registered: Jun 2005
Location: kill me
Can I get some suggestions on this? It still needs to be eq'd mixed and leveled but a remix I started today, got a bunch done in one sitting but the whole things seems very below-average and there is nothing special about it. There is no real bassline. The arp and the distorted end piece of the breakdown are from the remix pack, I dont think I can make it not-trancey.
Last edited by MSZ on May-05-2017 at 08:20
May-05-2017 08:15
Mr.Mystery
Static Guru
Registered: Dec 2001
Location: Vantaa
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Originally posted by MSZ
I dont think I can make it not-trancey.
There's a killer breaks track in there somewhere.
I don't know, I don't really have any suggestions... other than that it sounds too fast for me.
Originally posted by MSZ
Can I get some suggestions on this? It still needs to be eq'd mixed and leveled but a remix I started today, got a bunch done in one sitting but the whole things seems very below-average and there is nothing special about it. There is no real bassline. The arp and the distorted end piece of the breakdown are from the remix pack, I dont think I can make it not-trancey.
kick has no low end punch, was waiting for it to drop in but it never did, just need to fix that and some sort of simple bassline to make it groove along - yeah it will need some EQ as muddy in places, i like the overall sound though