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Juan Paulino
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Registered: Mar 2012
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quote:
Originally posted by Raphie
Curious what you guys think, not really a genre, just doing my thing...



Very nice and groovy~!


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Raphie
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ThnX guys, good feedback, i'll take it with me and see if i can improve


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Richard Butler
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Do you think this one is worth finishing or not? Be honest as I'd hate to waste time on it if not good.


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Finish it. Don't endlessly fuck with it .......finish it.


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Rodri Santos
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Registered: Sep 2009
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Red Dawn - So you are with dnb right now... i like the strings a lot, percussion/snare... the whole dnb thing is what doesn't work yet i'd try a more powerful snare and shakers very promising.



This is a new experiment i don't feel very motivated with this track in fact it's getting to long to finish it. For me seems a bit crowded like everything i do i am thinking of removing some stuff.

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This is a new experiment i don't feel very motivated with this track in fact it's getting to long to finish it. For me seems a bit crowded like everything i do i am thinking of removing some stuff.


This is a great groove man. I don't feel it's overcrowded - in fact I like how you manage to work in several percs & perc FX. Also the kick and bass work really well together. The only thing I crave is more variation as the track goes on. There's a lot of adding elements, but not as much subbing stuff. Take some of those awesome delayed bleeps, drop them, and make me miss them for a while. You've got me reeled in, but I keep waiting for something unexpected. I'm not accustomed to this genre, so I could be talking out my ass.

BTW I decided to hop back on the forum solely BC this WIP thread got me excited about producing again after hearing all the refreshing stuff you guys are working on.

I don't have a WIP myself I just want to leave feedback!


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Excess
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quote:
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This is a new experiment i don't feel very motivated with this track in fact it's getting to long to finish it. For me seems a bit crowded like everything i do i am thinking of removing some stuff.


imo this is the most cohesive piece of music i've heard from you. the added percussion hard panned at 3:35 does feel a bit overwhelming but it doesnt take away from me enjoying this. you could sit the entire mix except kick/bass back a db or two and this would be very, very solid imo.


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Rodri Santos
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thanks for compliments i just had some extra work to do on the breakdowns filtering the bass and this things looking for more contrast in the drops and a vocal loop to act as a hook.

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Red Dawn - So you are with dnb right now... i like the strings a lot, percussion/snare... the whole dnb thing is what doesn't work yet i'd try a more powerful snare and shakers very promising.



This is a new experiment i don't feel very motivated with this track in fact it's getting to long to finish it. For me seems a bit crowded like everything i do i am thinking of removing some stuff.


this is cool from about 4 mins 30 onward? theres a nice little 2 note thing going on there, couldnt hear it in the earlier section - really grooves along nicely!!

if you took from 4:30 to the end and made your track from that youd be on to something imo


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Richard Butler
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Rodri that's your best work so far, get it finished.

Thanks for the comments on red dawn - tbh it's not really dnb, but in any event your comment got me motivated to make better dnb beats on other tracks as I haven't cracked the drum side just yet.

Great thread this fellas, eh.

C'mon Looney, get some shit up.

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Trancelover03591
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I like the theme from about 3 to 3:30 including the pause leading up to the drop. I am listening on laptop speakers so I am not getting a full picture right now, but I think it might be a bit too crowded. A lot of driving percussion can work in Techno, if it is done right, for example:



At the same time, the more minimal approach, with a few big elements is sometimes the best route.

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I know I recently posted in this thread, but I have another one I have spent two days on. Nothing is final on it right now and I will probably add some more minor elements later but I wanted to finish an entire 1st draft. I am going for festival house music in this one. I want it short and drop driven for a general audience. I actually spent more time than usual getting the programming and arrangement down. The part leading up from the melodic breakdown section to the bassline drop was tough to bridge but I think I am happy with the general layout now. Any feedback is appreciated!


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Richard Butler
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Trancelover - fantastic breaks - what a melo apart from the 'off key' part (a taste thing probably).

Really cohesive effective structure and elements.

1 thing to work on imo - the drops. They are fine but I think you will get more bang for the buck by layering that bass lead thing with an ever changing syncy / dubby sound to keep things engaging.

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