yeah sorry for being lazy. naughty boy! i need to delete that ^_^ and at least take the vocals out

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Put some sort of a lead over it.

Good catch, its still missing the climax lead and I haven't programmed one yet

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Originally posted by Evolve140 yeah sorry for being lazy. naughty boy! i need to delete that ^_^ and at least take the vocals out

just listening to this on my laptop speakers......theres no doubt you have the production skills to make good tunes...... but i think (maybe) you are not sure what you actually want to make?? forgive me if im wrong, thats just how it seems to me

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sort of yeah, i need some inspiration.

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Something a little more prog/deep trance than some of my recent stuff, any advice on what could use improvement is appreciated: and if you haven't already and are willing, give my entry to the "Eye of the Storm" remix competition a listen: http://play.beatport.com/contests/g...53a0d1a71a060e3

I like the chords, but I'd change the pad sound because it sounds too digital, needs more air and subtle modulation to it IMO. And it needs some more emphasised memorable element to it(the current lead/melody is a bit too subtle IMO). Otherwise, the track is alright.

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Originally posted by Evolve140 yeah sorry for being lazy. naughty boy! i need to delete that ^_^ and at least take the vocals out

I like that it has that chilled out groovy feel to it. Technically it's reasonably fine, you just need to find the good direction for it. If you have the same inspiration problem like me then it's even better, I can't produce for shit any more.

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Originally posted by stealthman Vernon Wanderer will rediscover his roots back unto wandering vast endless plains miserably....

Here is the only worthy WIP in the past 6 months, somehow the inspiration is just gone.

My main question is if the cello is out of sync? It seems out of sync to me, but i just can't find a way to fit it in properly. Maybe i should throw it out

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Originally posted by stealthman Vernon Wanderer will rediscover his roots back unto wandering vast endless plains miserably....

Here's my new try at breaks, I finally got the right percussion and not everything is everywhere. I use logic's internal FM instrument for subass and i think it don't fit, you tell me. I also forgot to take an element off after the intro to go with the lead.

Anyway I'm still new at breaks, so give it to me. I also know i need more pads which will put later on.

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Originally posted by Evolve140 sort of yeah, i need some inspiration.

yeah and when you get it you already have the skills imo to go further, enjoy the journey

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Originally posted by PaULiN0 any takers?

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fuck it, i'll post another one.

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Originally posted by Trancelover03591 Put some sort of a lead over it.

Here's your lead.

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