|Originally posted by Juan Paulino |
Alright, Here goes one more time, hope is the last. I changed from A major scale to f-Major. I changed the breakdown melody. Took out a note in the pads so that they are in key with the choirs. I changed the first two leads to F and i guess thats almost it. If you spot any errors let me know and i'll give it the fix.
Well I like it very much dude, but it's on here for opinions I guess so I will give mine :-)
3:28 when the strings/choir or whatever comes in, i hear you alternating G, F, G, F etc etc, to me it would sound better holding the F and alternating a C, A, C, A above it. There seem to be some conflicting main notes in each of the different elements, very subtle I know but noticeable.
I like the uplifting bassline, have been meaning to do something like this myself