|Originally posted by Innocence Lost |
oh this turned into anti intro thing, got it.
Dude, intros are not a work in progress, because intros are all you ever do. It's also really easy to bang out a serviceable intro in about twenty minutes.
It's everything else that's tear-your-hair out difficult. And what you keep posting is, as I keep saying, very nicely produced. But there's nothing to it. Protip: it's only a work in progress if you're actually going to do something with it, and not just post virtually the same thing a week later. And the week after that.
Seriously. Want to get some real feedback? Not that you'll listen to any of it, but still: post something with a freakin' melody. Something other than kick/hat/snare/bass/FX.