|Originally posted by Rodri Santos |
Hey cryo, i see the regular lurkers around... nice. I still use a pack you made of open hats...
This is my new one if someone can suggest some changes before polishing.
Judging the time span on a reply to this track I am assuming you have it already finished,sorry about that. It seems our board is getting a little lazy on the new year =OP
As for the critique on this track. Your arrangement has some very progressive tones to it. I very much like the pads and the "ohhs" balance. Sounds lush.
The Arp is nice on this but almost sounds out of place imo and I am one of those who are always saying "Throw An Arp on it". It just seems almost like the composition of notes make it seem "circusy". Especially the second and third root notes. Not sure if you are trying to follow the base notes as compensation but it renders it almost...off.
Dig the bass and tonality of the production. Has some nice areas in the mix that are just really pleasant sounding.
Overall, I appreciate the production on this track it just sounds a little wonky to me.
Pretty much done with this one, need a final mix and master so the volume is a little low. Could use some production feedback if needed or what not.