|Originally posted by JPaulizle |
Wow I feeel like i learned a lot in little time. Now it actually feels like song writing than just throwing every thing together as if I were just jamming, Storyteller's approach is more artistic and artisan like. Def gave this track more room, space, and journey like texture.
Thanks guys. Now how do i go about finishing. Also if you think there's more changes to be done don't hesitate, i love criticism, it only helps.
My mouse is my paint brush.
All your tracks sound the same - the bassline stays on the same note, if you change the bassline notes through a progression, combined with your chords, thats where the emotion kicks in
Also your kicks are just too strong and dominant - they dont fit in with anything
You need to look at what you are doing, where you are going because its like your stuck in a rut at the moment.
Forget the gear, the plugins...concentrate on making something people wont turn off after 30 seconds
Why are you making music? What are you getting out of it? Are you happy with the music you are making right now?
p.s. everybody that has made tunes were at the same place you are now, once upon a time...