Originally posted by gordan100
This has probably too much bass and overall sounds kinda muddy, arrangement is bad as usual , but what do you think about melody stucture, is it boring and predictable?
It shouldn't sound right but it does, bass wise.
I'd drop that predictable guitar for one. come in earlier t[with that sound that you have in at 53 secs, but less resonance and quieter. Then shortly after add a big shimmering unusual pluk or something.
Evo thanks, I've altered it and almost finished now. The last rise is too short I think