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SystematicX1
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Registered: Sep 2010
Location: Las Vegas

quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
I'm not feeling this one buddy, sorry, just not for me & does not seem up to the standard you've been producing, but I do thank you for your kind feedback on mine.


All good Richard and for sure value your opinion. This year has been a little different for me on writing and I am approaching it differently as well to. At the same time, I am all over the board genre wise and this was another one of those tracks. Personally, I am going to stick with it because I am liking it the more I play with it. It does need some help but with the newer versions I have done, I think I have something with it.
Thanks bud


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Rodri Santos
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Milan

Hi there again, i see the forum is still alive, i have retaken music production , i have a WIP in progress i would love some criticism specially about the last part of the track which is the part i'm most scheptical with. Kick is probably too loud, sounds fine on studio speakers but distorted on cheap ones which may indicate something.



Thank you in advance.

Last edited by Rodri Santos on Nov-14-2019 at 13:52

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Rodri Santos
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Milan

quote:
Originally posted by SystematicX1
Ok then..pulling this out of the ashes. Third iteration as a matter of fact. A complete composition change and 2 arrangement changes. It's just getting to the point where I am starting to feel it better with a little more groove. Going to work on another singular note pattern to match the main so it isn't as repetitive. No mix yet as it still early (for an old song..lol)

*another revision has been replaced - added some vox chops and cleaned up the percussion a lil



I like the ideas overall, i feel you went for a minimalistic approach but some extra subtle percussion would probably add more atmosphere, specially gated reverb ones i feel could be a good addition. I don't like the snare sample i'd try something softer on this one.

Old Post Nov-14-2019 13:49  Spain
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Rodri Santos
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Milan

quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
So I've changed the bass (& other stuff), is this done or more work to do?

Cheers and upload some shit guys!



Good to see you still around, this one sounds very nice in arrangement design and mixdown i'd leave it as it is. well done.

Old Post Nov-14-2019 13:50  Spain
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Richard Butler
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Registered: Apr 2009
Location: London

quote:
Originally posted by Rodri Santos
Good to see you still around, this one sounds very nice in arrangement design and mixdown i'd leave it as it is. well done.


Shit the bed, Rodri dear boy, great to hear from you and thanks man


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Elusiv
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Registered: Oct 2019
Location: USA

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Originally posted by gordan100
You are finally beyond intro Kick is too boomey, but otherwise it's pretty nice... end is a bit weird


Now i think I am...this is my last inro.


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theterran
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Registered: Mar 2010
Location: Texass

quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
So I've changed the bass (& other stuff), is this done or more work to do?

Cheers and upload some shit guys!




I pop in every now again ninja style...

But this one made me dig up my login details to post. *thumbs up*...Sounds nice overall and shouldn't mess with it. Liked the rich verby backdrop, lots of nice depth, overall a nice, rich sound (no pun...).

Liked how much tension that build had for how smooth it was too. Good use of filters/FX there bud!

Only criticism from me : Either that pushed rev-pad or whatever bit crush / distortion FX being used @ 1:52 might be adding some unintentional clip / artifact garbage at that spot...Might also be a byproduct of SC too, *shrug*. Was really the only sore spot that stuck out to me.

Will have to give it a listen on the nearfields in the mornin' when people ain't sleepin'. (-Edit- Did this, the popping isn't as noticeable...but it's still there...Pretty minor tbh.)

Also still alive, added HS8's (<3) and a bunch of other crap to the arsenal, still pluggin' away at stuff and preening old stuff with new gear.

Career been all-consuming...but it's what's gonna get me the studio I want .

K, bye o/.

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SystematicX1
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Registered: Sep 2010
Location: Las Vegas

quote:
Originally posted by Rodri Santos
Hi there again, i see the forum is still alive, i have retaken music production , i have a WIP in progress i would love some criticism specially about the last part of the track which is the part i'm most scheptical with. Kick is probably too loud, sounds fine on studio speakers but distorted on cheap ones which may indicate something.



Thank you in advance.


I agree with Richard on this one (and Thanks for the reply on my last one) this one is pretty on point. I don't think I would change a thing.


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New stuff...


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Rodri Santos
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Milan

quote:
Originally posted by SystematicX1
I agree with Richard on this one (and Thanks for the reply on my last one) this one is pretty on point. I don't think I would change a thing.


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New stuff...



I like this one sounds a lot like something Pryda would make i'd choose a different sound for the bass but this is personal preference i sometimes don't like the bass sounds on Pryda tracks and they're recognized as music jewels.

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cryophonik
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Registered: Jan 2008
Location: Elk Grove, CA USA

quote:
Originally posted by Rodri Santos
Hi there again, i see the forum is still alive, i have retaken music production , i have a WIP in progress i would love some criticism specially about the last part of the track which is the part i'm most scheptical with. Kick is probably too loud, sounds fine on studio speakers but distorted on cheap ones which may indicate something.



Thank you in advance.


Oh.My.God. Good to see you back, Rodri!

Listening on my laptop, so I can't really comment on the kick (sounds fine though). The ending does seem to sorta fizzle out and lose energy, but seems like it would fit fine in a mix.


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SystematicX1
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quote:
Originally posted by Rodri Santos
I like this one sounds a lot like something Pryda would make i'd choose a different sound for the bass but this is personal preference i sometimes don't like the bass sounds on Pryda tracks and they're recognized as music jewels.


Pryda? Well damn..lol that has got to be the nicest compliment I have ever received. I don't actually try to model my music after Eric but he is for SURE a HUGE influence on me. Appreciate that reply man.
As for the track...I am getting a little wide on stereo separation and need to bring that back in I think. This was an earlier mix and I have tightened up immensely since.


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Rodri Santos
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Location: Milan

quote:
Originally posted by cryophonik
Oh.My.God. Good to see you back, Rodri!

Listening on my laptop, so I can't really comment on the kick (sounds fine though). The ending does seem to sorta fizzle out and lose energy, but seems like it would fit fine in a mix.


Hey cryo, i see the regular lurkers around... nice. I still use a pack you made of open hats...

This is my new one if someone can suggest some changes before polishing.

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