|Originally posted by fuxzz |
I think you have the fundamentals of your intro starting at 1:14. If you could use that (I don't mean you should change that section per se) and make that build longer, maybe introduce it with 16 bars were you in some way give a heads up on that stutter, you would have a great beginning. Maybe use some of the notes with delay or something. As it is, all happens to quickly. The interaction between the stutter and the muffled piano is in my opinion fantastic. It just sounds ggggrrreat.
I think you should try to build everything up slower, "starting" with that section at 1:14 which gives a great mood right from the start. Maybe you already have a longer version? In this one, everything comes to quickly, you miss out on the journey between the sections. I also think you can have 16 bars where you have the bass more or less alone (as you have at 2:13 - minus the piano) , like a in between, not at the beginning where the bass alone feels to empty. The section at 0:44 does also sound fantastic, but that is imo what you should build everything towards.
Just some thoughts...take it or leave it.
Happy new year!
Hey, thanks! I'll take some for sure This will definitely help. I don't have longer version yet, but i will post it here once it's done.
Happy new year, to you and everybody!
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