Half finished track I made recently, not quite sure where to take it. I had a bunch of stuff going on but stripped it back becasue it didn't feel right..
Originally posted by Woony
Half finished track I made recently, not quite sure where to take it. I had a bunch of stuff going on but stripped it back becasue it didn't feel right..
It's a cool groove and i like background noise... but it's completely flat and static. Use the knobs, some wise man said
Jul-18-2016 18:27
TranceLover007
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Registered: Sep 2009
Location: Seattle, USA
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Originally posted by Woony
Half finished track I made recently, not quite sure where to take it. I had a bunch of stuff going on but stripped it back becasue it didn't feel right..
Agree with @gordan100 on this WIP - need to have more development going on in here.
Darek
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Originally posted by Woony
Nice! could use a more earthy kick and more swing (both of which have been mentioned I guess )
The trance track is also nice - could use a string to develop it more. Did you use an arpeggiator? I'm not really getting the results I want with Ableton's Arp.
i was actually going to title the post "Gone Woony" as i was trying to go for that laid back style that is in most of your tracks
swing can easily be fixed, kick seems to stand out a bit too much maybe so will look at changing that
Originally posted by Woony
Half finished track I made recently, not quite sure where to take it. I had a bunch of stuff going on but stripped it back becasue it didn't feel right..
like it, clap sample is cool - yeah maybe modulate the chord sounds somehow, filter or tonality...
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Just initial and basic concept without any fillers and FX but melody should be there - what do you guys think?
Darek
yo Darek, long time! its a nice start i guess but something does not sit right with the groove for me, a bit stop-start, maybe you can develop it further......
Originally posted by evo8
yo Darek, long time! its a nice start i guess but something does not sit right with the groove for me, a bit stop-start, maybe you can develop it further......
How is going man lol - just took some time off for my family and looking forward to produce again - appreciate your and @gordan100 comment on this early WIP
Just give me some clue about the part which is not clicking with you
Darek
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Originally posted by gordan100
Not completely happy with some parts yet...
Just a soundtest
Once you get the mix sorted, it will be better than anything I could make for sure.
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Jul-19-2016 09:43
MSZ
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Registered: Jun 2005
Location: kill me
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Originally posted by TranceLover007
Just initial and basic concept without any fillers and FX but melody should be there - what do you guys think?
Darek
There is an issue with your bass, like the first note is good, but when it goes a little higher you lose so much sub frequency content that it doesnt work. Maybe either try 1 octave lower for the rest of the notes, and mixed in with higher octave, create a new channel for that. Or, play with synthesis, or.. remove the sub from that bass, create a sub layer and layer that bad boy in problem solved.
Should be good then but, take my advice with a grain of salt
My first dub technoish track/wip, I know the bongos are no good mainly because they're so static, im gonna buy a djembe or something off craigslist and replace it when I can. Its probably not very good but I had fun.
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