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fuxzz
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Here's one I will probably send out, what would you change?

Is the bass taking up too much room? Drop 1 a bit lack lustre?



For starter, the glitching seems off, sounds too mechanical. I would look at that.

And at the start, you have som nasty click going on at the off beat percussion. Other then that the beat is nice.

Im not sure about the sound coming in at 1:23, it doesnt really fit in my opinion. For me, something else would take it's place, maybe a dark vocal sample? I like the drop however.

The second break is good, but again, the same sound as in the first break annoys me. Right at the transition into the break it sounds cool though.

And again, at the end of the track, the glitching, not very tight.

I like the bass, but I think that there are others here that can give you a more reliable opinion about wether it's too big or not.


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fuxzz
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Originally posted by evo8
i changed the kick - perhaps the last one was a bit on the heavy side



Sounds good too me.

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i always like my kicks to have a certain dominance, nothing i hate more than a weak kick - i hear what your saying about fitting in with the track tho

quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Here's one I will probably send out, what would you change?

Is the bass taking up too much room? Drop 1 a bit lack lustre?



this is really good i have to say. i was listening to a Tale Of Us set and switched to this, it would fit in very well with that style

drop at 2:03 is very good, driving. 2nd breakdown comes in a bit abruptly, some sort of fx there might help to blend it in

im not totally sure about after the 2nd breakdown and i dont think that snare fits, kinda spoils the groove
also id lay off the stutter fx a bit as it sounds a bit too obvious, use sparingly


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Originally posted by SystematicX1
This sounds fucking dope Evo!


thanking you!


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Richard Butler
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Excellent and most helpful feedback, I think I've taken on board all suggestions including adding a spookey vocal I made before and Evo I quietened that snare in drop 2

Changed some leed melodies etc
Thanks so much


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fuxzz
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Thats better! I like what you did with the melody. Maybe some of the closed hats are a little too loud though? Maybe thats just me.

Pretty cool track, dark as hell.

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Richard Butler
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Is this ok without vocals?



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Constantin
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It's ok w/o vocal, buuuuuuut a lill' vocal fx, sth like a female choir "aaah" with a little bit of stutter on the tail could add to the dreamy feeling of the track ^^.


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SystematicX1
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quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Is this ok without vocals?




Just my opinion. Honestly Richard, I don't think it needs vox at all


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Is this ok without vocals?




just a quick listen on my laptop here, like the melodies they stand out nicely, its kinda like that Anjunadeep stuff, definitely not deep house


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I like it but the whole mix sounds kind of boxy. Like there is a small room reverb put over the top of the mix (in particlar the rythmix section). The bassline is a bit to prominent sometimes, just putting it a few dB down should fix that. Other than it was a nice listen .


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Richard Butler
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quote:
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I like it but the whole mix sounds kind of boxy. Like there is a small room reverb put over the top of the mix (in particlar the rythmix section). The bassline is a bit to prominent sometimes, just putting it a few dB down should fix that. Other than it was a nice listen .



I noticed the bass was a bit loud when I listened again this morning. This boxy sound you've mentioned before, I think it's because I add a room reverb to parts of the drums, dunno for me it just feels a bit more alive, but I take your feedback seriously so will have a another listen.

OR it might be the Cubase vintage compressor across the master that is making it boxy. I'll have a fiddle.

I also noticed some of the leeds are playing over one another a bit to much here n there so will strip some back.

Thanks for listening you guys.

BTW - I'm making my first ever hip hop track with a rap done by some bloke, has anyone here made any hop?


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