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Originally posted by Mise Here is something I have just finished. Any thoughts?

For me the kick is separate from the track and not an embedded part of the work. In other words it's the wrong kick - IMO. I don't know about others but I find a ready made kick never fits a track properly, that you have to keep layering maybe 3 kicks and fiddling with each individual kick until it suddenly comes good.

The rest of the elements sound powerful but as a whole the work is a little anonymous, I'm wanting a definite personality stamp, some sort of motif.

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Thanks guys I appreciate all the comments, I'll clean the mid bass area a bit more and I see Richard what you mean with the kick issue.

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havent posted anything in a while - this is in the new room so its gonna take me a while to get things translating correctly

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Originally posted by evo8 havent posted anything in a while - this is in the new room so its gonna take me a while to get things translating correctly

So far sound clean and balance - levels are good and progression works fine at the moment - you are on the right path Paul !!!

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Here is my latest collab with Carlos and Amy (vocal) - still in concept stage but melody and vocal placement is already there.

Please give it try and let me know if you enjoy it



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Originally posted by evo8 havent posted anything in a while - this is in the new room so its gonna take me a while to get things translating correctly

This has very well written channels, and its groovy as all hell. I know what it needs, To me; this track sounds ready. You should definitely make a sandwich. Once this ceremony is finished, hit all your fader moves in one session. automate until your machine burns.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Here is my latest collab with Carlos and Amy (vocal) - still in concept stage but melody and vocal placement is already there. Please give it try and let me know if you enjoy it Darek

thanks Darek, your sounds good, i would maybe cut a little bit more out of the low end but then again im not trusting this room yet

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Originally posted by Kthought This has very well written channels, and its groovy as all hell. I know what it needs, To me; this track sounds ready. You should definitely make a sandwich. Once this ceremony is finished, hit all your fader moves in one session. automate until your machine burns.

was just about to make a sandwich and all that other stuff ^^^

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Originally posted by Mise Thanks guys I appreciate all the comments, I'll clean the mid bass area a bit more and I see Richard what you mean with the kick issue.

I think your kick is too loud, and there isn't really a defined bass sound to go along with it.

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Originally posted by evo8 havent posted anything in a while - this is in the new room so its gonna take me a while to get things translating correctly

Hmm it does seem to show just a tad. I know I'm contradicting to what others are saying but I think things don't sound quite as tight as I'm used to hearing from you. Not saying any of it sounds bad, far from it, just agreeing with you about your new room and that I know you could get an extra 10% out of that when you get used to it.

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Here is my latest collab with Carlos and Amy (vocal) - still in concept stage but melody and vocal placement is already there. Please give it try and let me know if you enjoy it

I won't comment on the mix as its just a concept, but WOW I think this has so much potential. I love the vocals and the lyrics, its a really good song imo Ive just played it 3 times in a row lol. Granted it needs some work but if done right you would give cryo a run for his money

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Originally posted by TranceLover007 Here is my latest collab with Carlos and Amy (vocal) - still in concept stage but melody and vocal placement is already there. Please give it try and let me know if you enjoy it Darek

This is pro work, It sounds like you know exactly what you are doing and where you're aiming, kudos to those involved. I don't have any input really, but check pm's.

Superistic - great track, very pro sound.

DariusX - also very pro production, but tbh not the kind of music i would listen.

djnitride - very nice atmosphere and progression on Techtrance WIP, it has head and tail and everything


Here's something i worked on today, please let me know what you think

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