|Originally posted by MSZ |
I'd say that track is pretty perfect Alpha, nice work.
Thanks, dude. Wasn't sure about structure and a few other things, doing it live again, but I guess I'll leave it and move on.
Revision 2: its still incoherent, doesnt make sense and has no flow. Gonna rest on this one for a bit.
As I mentioned before, I still like the beginning and now that you developed it a bit more, I like it even more. It's relatively simple, but has a nice flow...although I'm still not sure about the synth that comes in after 1:30 or so. It may work, but perhaps introduce it in a better way? Not sure. If you're feeling stuck, resting on it may not be a bad idea, or just finish it.
Last edited by AlphaStarred on May-06-2016 at 00:13