Hey mate, commenting as I listen...
kick and bass are great! Lots of improvement compared to your previous tracks concerning the bassline. Now its very dry, but it also excellently sits in the mix.
Nice FM synth in the background, works well.
The bubbling acid synthline starting at 1:09 is made in Vanguard, huh? You can hear that quite obviously. Maybe a little more LFO action on it, or some more FX will improve it, because honestly its getting a little too repetitive and droning over time.
2:30 ... glitched sounds in the background. Not bad, adds depth.
3:10 nice vocal FX!! How do you do that?
Break down now, new lead synth coming in now is good.
New buildup now. Getting interesting!
5:00 woot, nice layering!
5:30 ... and another change to the melody - maybe try longer notes or some delay/reverb. Otherwise, nice idea of layering.
Not much to complain about here. Mixing seemed great to me now in this second version. The only thing I'd really consider changing completely is the droning acidline in the background. I dont know, maybe try using another synth instead of Vanguard for it.
Otherwise, great work mate!
Cybernetika albums (free DL): Atropos (2009) | Nanospheric (2008) | Neural Network Expansion (2007) | Promo #1 (2006) | Paralysis (2005)