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Rank 1 - airwave (electronic maji opening remix)


danke

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The pads at the start are nice... and the drums are good... just one drum problem that I heard was at 1:28 in, one of the hihats seemed to go away and was replaced by a different one... it sounds awkward to just lose some frequencies.

I think the problem is with the development of the song... it doesn't really go anywhere... there's no real progression throughout the track... 1:30 in is the same as 3:40 in. Usually I expect a good build-up or climactic part with some big synths or deep harmony... but this track is missing that.

Also, the piano sounds kinda fake... and the melody it plays has some notes that don't fit melodically with the rest of the song.

The first minute is quite nice. Definitely needs some work elsewhere tho.

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Great string sound! Needs another pad in behind though..not loud...just something fuller. Especially at 2:20 to add some build as the previous caller has mentioned!
That kick and percussion pattern are really good bro! How come I never see you on Tastyfresh???
I agree...definitely needs a climax around 3:00.

but....

Good Version!

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its actaully a violin sample i have 300 mb of this stuff yah im working on your suggestions...

i got kicked off tastyfresh for posting a illegal remix...kind of ironic since this is another illegal remix...

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LOL don't worry mate... we've all posted an illegal remix or two at some point. Just some of us are lucky enough not to get caught.

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WHAT THE HAY??
Glad to know that...I will steer clear of posting any there!! Is it really illegal to make a remix of someone's work? HECK...its different if you don't change anything, but remixes are a lot of stinkin' work!! More often than not, they are harder than making your own stuff!
I dont get it... White Labels.. Bootlegs... its just common place now..
I'm surprised I dont get kicked off for promoting MP3 distribution (in my sig! I use the same sig on Tasty!)

Peace Maji!

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one of my fav songs of all time
k about ur remix, the kick sounds a bit wierd, id def. change it, the treble is too high, the piano needs to be raised (the volume) ,

keep workin at it, ull get there

peace out

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Yeah dude, this is my favorite track, I have about 37 different versions of this track, ranging from Airwave to BReathing, and this ia a good mix man, keep it up!!!

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I played your track on national radio in Belgium yesterday.
I was no aware that you were on this forum also!