I think the percussion work is just great, espeically as it all comes in there towards the beginning of the track. The kick comes in a bit awkwardly as its very round, and tight, with a hollow feel to it. That first sustained saw type lead that comes in works well but it fights with those higher sounds you are using. Take the melodies further!

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cool, thanks for checkin it out

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