Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Wooburn Green, Bucks, UK
trance :: SV Digital - One Day Soon
SV Digital - One Day Soon
New trance track here. I made this in a day (hence the title), unlike most of my tracks which take ages. Very happy with it in general and feedback so far has been really positive. I love the melody. Just want to know what people think before deciding if it's worth putting in the extra effort to bring it right up to scratch. So any comments you have will be greatly appreciated even if its just to say you do/don't like it.
Needs refinement,
That snare (afterbeat) has just too many bass in it. Needs more energy, try add some more synths around the bass! I hear you used some sfx in it, but hardly any more percussion Percussion is what I really lacks about this track. The melody is pretty good, but you need to use some other synths on that. It soundz like a freaking xylophone! - delays on that one!!
Oct-15-2004 19:55
RaverBabySy
Senior tranceaddict
Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Wooburn Green, Bucks, UK
Thanks for your comments, will take a look at those points
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Sarnia, Ontario Christian Trance Producer
The pulsing bass synth IS kinda annoying. But the xylophone-ish synth is great IMO.
Love the melody of this. Its my kinda cheese! LOL
The piano chords I think are the best part. Love that. Nice break too.
At 4:08 it takes off great. The kick could be better.
Worth taking the time to polish, I'd say!
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Oct-16-2004 18:24
Sunquest
Just Be
Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Thornhill,Toronto, Canada
the beats and bass sound amatuerish but ull pass that over time, no biggy, ur structure is great, piano work is great
melody is very happy hehe, belongs on Trancemaster compilation,
keep it up m8, ull get there soon enough
peace out
Registered: Dec 2003
Location: Wooburn Green, Bucks, UK
cheers for the comments guys. Yeah it is well cheesey I know! There's too much moody prog trance around these days so I'm going right to the other end of the scale. Bring back the happy days of trance!
Registered: Oct 2003
Location: Sarnia, Ontario Christian Trance Producer
I agree!
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Oct-17-2004 01:34
websley
Senior tranceaddikt
Registered: Apr 2004
Location: Helmond
quote:
Originally posted by RaverBabySy
cheers for the comments guys. Yeah it is well cheesey I know! There's too much moody prog trance around these days so I'm going right to the other end of the scale. Bring back the happy days of trance!
I agree too, just work that thing out would you? - Sometimes it seems that TA only is about prog nowadays
Percussion is what I really lacks about this track. The melody is pretty good, but you need to use some other synths on that. It soundz like a freaking xylophone! - delays on that one!!
