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Posted by MSZ on Jun-17-2018 02:51:

pm me, solo the bass and send it to me ill show you my thought process on what I would do to process your bass, take off any effects, download reason 10 demo either make an account or ill give you my login.


Posted by Richard Butler on Jun-17-2018 16:12:

https://soundcloud.com/butlerrichard/endless

More or less done, now could u tell me if I should re-do the vocals, or have less of them in here?

Sorry cant embed SC just now. Shortly I will be able to once I'm done creating a new alter-ego for all my new tracks.


Posted by Richard Butler on Jun-17-2018 16:33:

Oh and another vocal track for your deliberation, any crits welcome and very much needed lol

More chilled than the track above I posted

https://soundcloud.com/butlerrichard/midnight-son1


Posted by MSZ on Jun-18-2018 21:48:

quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Oh and another vocal track for your deliberation, any crits welcome and very much needed lol

More chilled than the track above I posted

https://soundcloud.com/butlerrichard/midnight-son1


if you had a gangnam style parody video, you'd be a billionaire.


Posted by MSZ on Jun-19-2018 02:47:



maybe this is too noisy


Posted by SystematicX1 on Jun-19-2018 06:08:

quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Oh and another vocal track for your deliberation, any crits welcome and very much needed lol

More chilled than the track above I posted

https://soundcloud.com/butlerrichard/midnight-son1


Richard,

IMHO on this particular track, the Vox cut does not work, unlike some of your others. And personally, I do not think it is needed any way.
On the other side, I really really like this and as it seems we all are taking a retro feel in our music as of late, it is very appropriate and catchy. I really like the movement in your composition and really great arrangement tones.
I for sure want to see this fully developed and possibly a new favorite from you.
If there was anything that I could critique well there was one area.
Curious. Is this track in mono? It seems narrow in the mix.


Posted by gordan100 on Jun-19-2018 16:06:

quote:
Originally posted by MSZ


maybe this is too noisy


It is a bit imo, but has nice chords and progression, it's worth to play more with this


Posted by gordan100 on Jun-19-2018 16:15:

@Richard - was listening both of your tracks few days ago, didn't comment anything cause tbh didn't really like neither. I've heard crazy nice and creative tracks from you but these are not among them imo


Posted by gordan100 on Jun-27-2018 01:33:

Any good?


Posted by TranceLover007 on Jun-27-2018 02:04:

What happened man - a jazzy vibe you are working on lol - net bad at all, just need more theme development, maybe a piano or synth going with some catchy melody and at least one break with chords changes to add some variation and attractiveness

Also noted that your levels are more set and mixing is improved quite a bit.

Darek

Here is my another chillout WIP


Posted by gordan100 on Jun-27-2018 02:43:

Thanks Darek, it wasn't intentional jazzy, it just happened that way

This wip of yours is nice and sounds good, but tbh nothing memorable imho, i liked some of your prev chill tracks more than this one.


Posted by MSZ on Jun-27-2018 12:16:

quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
What happened man - a jazzy vibe you are working on lol - net bad at all, just need more theme development, maybe a piano or synth going with some catchy melody and at least one break with chords changes to add some variation and attractiveness

Also noted that your levels are more set and mixing is improved quite a bit.

Darek

Here is my another chillout WIP



theres something about that slap bass that is not sitting well for me, think something to do with the pitch(maybe tuned too flat?), but nice work.



i've been wrestling this wip for a while, not making much progress maybe slowly inching forward. the mix is off, not sure how im going to sequence it or keep it.


Posted by TranceLover007 on Jun-27-2018 18:36:

quote:
Originally posted by MSZ
theres something about that slap bass that is not sitting well for me, think something to do with the pitch(maybe tuned too flat?), but nice work.



i've been wrestling this wip for a while, not making much progress maybe slowly inching forward. the mix is off, not sure how im going to sequence it or keep it.


Thanks Mac for taking your time and listen to my WIP - as far as this "slap" bass line statement, I will have to check it out because there is two of those basses working together (one is flat one) and the balance may be shifted a bit out of proportion, thanks

Going back to your WIP - how wide is your bass, did you freq shift some of those freq?

Cheers,

Darek


Posted by TranceLover007 on Jun-27-2018 18:38:

quote:
Originally posted by gordan100
..... but tbh nothing memorable imho.......


Appreciate your comment man - any suggestion what memorable element/s would you like to hear in this WIP?

Cheers,

Darek


Posted by gordan100 on Jul-01-2018 15:17:

quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Appreciate your comment man - any suggestion what memorable element/s would you like to hear in this WIP?

Cheers,

Darek


I don't know Darek, it sounds nice and everything but it's like i already heard dozens of tracks like that

Here's an idea (for a track, not saying there are memorable elements in it)


Posted by MSZ on Jul-01-2018 16:07:

quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Going back to your WIP - how wide is your bass, did you freq shift some of those freq?


whats freq shifting? dont think I have anything that does that except maybe the vocoder. its probably pretty wide, I dont mono stuff.


Posted by SystematicX1 on Jul-01-2018 22:15:

quote:
Originally posted by MSZ
I dont mono stuff.


o.O


Posted by Richard Butler on Jul-01-2018 22:30:

quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
What happened man - a jazzy vibe you are working on lol - net bad at all, just need more theme development, maybe a piano or synth going with some catchy melody and at least one break with chords changes to add some variation and attractiveness

Also noted that your levels are more set and mixing is improved quite a bit.

Darek

Here is my another chillout WIP



I enjoyed the synths and sounds all but feel the drums aren't Human enough, and they sound a bit lumpy and basic. You get some great synth pluks.


Posted by Richard Butler on Jul-01-2018 22:36:

quote:
Originally posted by gordan100


Here's an idea (for a track, not saying there are memorable elements in it)



For me your nicest sound yet, a lovely piece, finish it

What reverb are you using I love how it sounds


Posted by Richard Butler on Jul-01-2018 22:47:

Any crits - is it quiet? Thx guys


Posted by gordan100 on Jul-01-2018 23:31:

quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
For me your nicest sound yet, a lovely piece, finish it

What reverb are you using I love how it sounds


Thanks, will try. I'm using fl reverb 2, comes with fl studio.

quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler



It seems to quiet. Kick is to powerful? I like the idea, it gets a bit samey after while for me, maybe needs some cutting or more work on the arrangement.


Posted by TranceLover007 on Jul-02-2018 19:52:

quote:
Originally posted by Richard Butler
Any crits - is it quiet? Thx guys



This may be great track man but your dynamics and sound level is not letting this production shine the most - don't know if this will help Richard.

Darek


Posted by gordan100 on Jul-02-2018 22:29:

Anyone like the destroyed vocal sample after 2:08?


Posted by TranceLover007 on Jul-02-2018 22:46:

quote:
Originally posted by gordan100
Anyone like the destroyed vocal sample after 2:08?



Couple of things to consider Gordan, one is this buzzing noise almost from the beginning which is unnecessary (in my opinion), second is your vocal and I agree should be change to something more suitable for this type of vibe - my $0.02

Darek


Posted by gordan100 on Jul-02-2018 23:03:

quote:
Originally posted by TranceLover007
Couple of things to consider Gordan, one is this buzzing noise almost from the beginning which is unnecessary (in my opinion), second is your vocal and I agree should be change to something more suitable for this type of vibe - my $0.02

Darek


Thanks for listening Darek, yeah maybe i should get rid of that buzz on bass. I still kinda like the vocal, i'll check it again in the morning.


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