Hey,
new tune from me, very rough yet but I'll try finish it next week. Would like some feedback on the arrangement, melodies and... heck, give me feedback on everything


carl_b_-_in_tears [4'10'' - 4,47 mb ]

thanks!

Regards,
Carl

hmmmm
probably the second worst tune of all time ive ever heard
ofcourse #1 is Matt van Wyk vs. Sunquest - Reality


realllllly quality piece of work
as i told u before
this is another hit, should be on the backside of all day
sick bass beats, pads
juicy
melody owns, would kill a club i think,
just one thing, melody starts too late
and the whole song is too short
u always need 2 minutes in and 2 minutes out
for the dj
someone once told me this, but i forgot who :S
maybe james? hehe
anyways
GREAT track love it
peace out

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Originally posted by Sunquest just one thing, melody starts too late and the whole song is too short u always need 2 minutes in and 2 minutes out for the dj

just FYI, the tune is _not_ supposed to end like that

thanks for the feedback!
how about a sunquest remix?

edit: damn spelling :P

ill think about it

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hmm i can hear the sad emotion.

But this track is not doing it for me, i do feel the Lead, but it screams for more Power imo.

Drums are really excellent, same with the perc, Bass is nice and it's working good with the kick.

I miss some kinda riff or arp in the intro/build to create an overwhelming feel with those strings/pads.

Some big choirs(bit big sounding ones like Albinoni) would really work in the intro/buildup as well.

The melody is really ace, but i miss the huge build and the exploding climax here.

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Originally posted by Octanesyco Greetings. My name is Casey. You can call me Moose. -Moose

great sounds all around Carl Im loving this track. Good Job great drums and percs awsome bass. Loving it all keep it up



-Wes J

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Amazing dude!

Sounds a bit like the M.I.D.O.R & Six4Eight sound! really good mate!

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Top 3 atm

Chris Shepherd - Shalloa
Matti Kotala - Aedena (Luke Terry remix)
Miika Kuisma - Orion

This is sounding good Carl, all of your stuff is excellent!

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Im loving the arrangement, good stuff, nice solid layout...

Although the melody is nothing i'd care to listen to more then once( you know's those songs that you get up in the morning anxious to listen to again?) ya, it could have used a better melody that stood out more, seemed a bit dull for some reason.(only my opinion though)

Other then that you got some cool fx going on, keep it up carl!

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good stuff man as always, i do agree that it could do with an extra layer or something when it kicks back in tho

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Sounds great! Man you sure get some fat sounds, I guess your mixing skills are highly refined. Nice melody too, great uplifting buildup and awesome fx.
I think I have to agree with the others though, I could have used some really bright pads / choir in the build-up ( around 4:36 in this sample ). You know, the ones that actually make you break out in a sweat on the dancefloor.
Truly inspiring work!

awesome track carl!!! your tracks been gettign a great response here in california, specially in raves =) , nice job and keep up the excellent work