TranceAddict Forums Archive > DJing / Production / Promotion > Music Producers Promotion Please comment on my new track Day Dreaming View this Thread in Original format PetervG1 Hello there! I just finished my latest track Day Dreaming. In order to improve the track, I would appreciate some comments on this. Here is the track: Peter Francken - Day Dreaming by Peter Francken Enjoy en let me know! Andrepate The beginning is pretty sick, the offbeat bass really sounds good, and then theres the pad section in between the beginning and the first drop, I don't like how the snare pops out of nowhere, the drop is nice and smooth, and then from there to the end, I don't see much difference, sorry. Still has a nice groovy feeling to it :) PetervG1 Hi Andrepate, Thanks for the comment. I see what you mean by the snare. Let me work on that. So after the second drop I probably have to add a new rif or so to keep things interesting... Let me see what I can do. Thanks again. Richard Butler Your sense of sound is good and you posotion the bass well, but you got to spend days on drums - they sound like a Yamaha Keyboard pattern playing in a Kia car showroom - real 1995 cheese! The kick sound is ok though. The tune itself is pleasant. EDIT - the highs are very harsh and make listening difficult. Work on that. PetervG1 Hi Richard, Thanks for the comment. Well discribed on the drums :-), but I agree. More people told me the same. I'll keep the hight a little more low... Good comments. Thanks. CLICK TO RETURN TO TOP OF PAGE

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